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Nov 12, 2008
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A VIOLATION- REVISED
A Violation Sweet and gentle and kind Heart Asleep in Love’s tender hold Innocence and Purity Unable yet to see Slowly coming near to you An obscenity Hidden behind tender tears A warm touch And Words that seem to care Unaware A heart black as coal Lurks waiting To violate your soul
— Geremia, Nov 12, 2008
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Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Hey, Longo!
Jasmine
17 years 7 months ago
Sad, yet so beautiful!!!!
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