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poetic rant about the world

look people the world is going into depression

this is horrible

this is just my own confession

this is a world that is deplorable

not to make u feel bad

but I see it as the truth

not to make you feel sad

but everyone is blaming the youth

 

look people this is not cool

we have people in trouble

we have people with no school

we have people living in rubble

 

look people we should all just stop reproducing

kids in orphanages a better place to sleep

look at us were just loosing

we are getting ourselves into something deep

 

— Tessadiana, Nov 12, 2008

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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks

thanks for reading my poetry Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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