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Nov 12, 2008
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poetic rant about the world
look people the world is going into depression
this is horrible
this is just my own confession
this is a world that is deplorable
not to make u feel bad
but I see it as the truth
not to make you feel sad
but everyone is blaming the youth
look people this is not cool
we have people in trouble
we have people with no school
we have people living in rubble
look people we should all just stop reproducing
kids in orphanages a better place to sleep
look at us were just loosing
we are getting ourselves into something deep
— Tessadiana, Nov 12, 2008
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Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Very Cool, Tessa!
Tessadiana
17 years 7 months ago
thanks
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Much better, really like it.
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