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leonard daranjo
Nov 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Quintessential Revolution - Twin Senryu


inchoate wisdom

finds fruition in time, through

applied consciousness

 



clear all  echoes

let  silence descend, then

lose yourself in it



reworked from worked from short poems written in 2007.

— leonard daranjo, Nov 13, 2008
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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard

Once again, you have shown to be a master at these. Nicely written my friend~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

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