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Tessadiana
Nov 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

life to death

from the battle groundto the place that holds many tearsknown as flanders field from going to schoolto holding a gun in handto six feet under from joyus laughterto holding my cold ,dead friendto a funeral from life and from loveto cold and isolatedin all the same war
— Tessadiana, Nov 13, 2008
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Lonnie

17 years 7 months ago

Bravo, Tessa!

You're really knockin' 'em out now, girl! Another winner!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

life to death

Tessadiana, I thought this to be very well written, Nice Piece! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

Tessa

Dark and gloomy but well done Chrys
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Tessadiana

17 years 7 months ago

thanks

thank you all for reading Tessadiana<3 “black is nor darkness nor fear but the ignorant bliss we have all forgotten"

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