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Nov 22, 2008
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Music, Magic, Sharing, and Finally Peace.
Accept my music, and who I am.
Maybe I might make you smile;
the bottom-line,
Life's toughest twine,
won't hold you all the while.
For there's too much Hope we need to share
and music has such Magical Fun;
so whatever you do,
is all up to you,
when all is said and done.
Please don't pretend not to understand
that sharing everything Positive;
makes us all feel Great,
because we all relate,
by sharing what we each have to Give.
Please let me know your take on this.
Can we make our burdens lighten, and cease?
If we attempt to get along,
concentrating on Love's sweet song,
inevitably, we can live our live's in Peace.
— docmaverick, Nov 22, 2008
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Janice Pearce
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