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Music, Magic, Sharing, and Finally Peace.

Accept my music, and who I am.
Maybe I might make you smile;
the bottom-line,
Life's toughest twine,
won't hold you all the while.

For there's too much Hope we need to share
and music has such Magical Fun;
so whatever you do,
is all up to you,
when all is said and done.

Please don't pretend not to understand
that sharing everything Positive;
makes us all feel Great,
because we all relate, 
by sharing what we each have to Give.

Please let me know your take on this.
Can we make our burdens lighten, and cease?
If we attempt to get along,
concentrating on Love's sweet song,
inevitably, we can live our live's in Peace.

 

— docmaverick, Nov 22, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Music

doc, Without music we have nothing.[well maybe poetry and family too] Enjoyed this one, Thanks for posting~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

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