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Nature Mithya
Dec 01, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tendered Sport

Twist


— Nature Mithya, Dec 01, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

sport poem

Nature, this poem is a very hot scene. Some nice vivid images all the way through. My feeling is that the end should be a bit more afterglowish. A bit more done. Perhaps a reason that these lovers are so involved emotionally. A clear sumation. wcw

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