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coke and pepsi

people can't you see
coke and pepsi are the same
gosh what a weird world
— Tessadiana, Dec 03, 2008

Critiques

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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

hi diana

i think its been a long time since i last met you. how ur doing? this is a short yet a beautiful piece. really enjoyed it. HUG ZARUL http://www.neopoet.com/node/15986
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Diana

Nice write. they are both the same as in they are colas. Taste and smell totally different. *LOL* Loved the write. short, sweet and very good. I took the old pepsi challenge at the county fair years ago. 4 times they tried to fool me and 4 times I picked which was coke from smell alone. *LOL* They got mad at me. Looking forward to reading more my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "If law abiding citizens are denied guns, the police don't need theirs. After all, the criminals aren't feared, just the law abiding citizens." Rett
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Tessa

Sorry Rett and Janice... big Pepsi fan here. :~) Short-n-sweet, and yes, they look the same, but definitely are not the same taste-wise. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If the opposite of 'pro' is 'con' would that make the opposite of 'progress' Congress? Just wonderin'....."
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

He he he

of course you are. You're a yankee. ;^) Respectfully, Rett: "If law abiding citizens are denied guns, the police don't need theirs. After all, the criminals aren't feared, just the law abiding citizens." Rett
Mark

Mark

17 years 6 months ago

Ray

Ray Charles knows the difference "Who's the wise guy" Cute one Tess :-) If you read that I feel lucky. Mark

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