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Aug 29, 2011
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Every Song
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
Can you hear it too
Life has been
like a beautiful Love song
Since I heard the sweet tones
Which flowed from your lips
Making me feel alive once again
My heart now dances
Where before you came
It had forgotten the steps
With you I will stay
Until the end of my days
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
It is spring forever
As long as I am with you
I am the tree
And you are the mockingbird
That sings just for me
When ever I need you
Or wish to embrace you
I look to the music
Where I always hear you
Right here in my head
Oh how I love you
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
LMFAO!
I'm just in love and I don't drink. I guess if I did, I would love my pint too, but I am truly intoxicated with Jonette.
Thanks for the read.
Eddie
lou
14 years 1 month ago
Eddie
Oh to be in love !!!!!
I enjoyed this poem emensly although it was a little mushy, and romantic, for my usual tastes.. I liked the fact you used a song to evoke your feelings.
Ps does she know about the belt? LMAO!!!
Lou
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
lou
She has a belt she beats me with. Funny thing is, I like it. LMFAO!!
NO, she does not know anything about the belt joke.
thanks for the read, and comment.
Eddie
weirdelf
14 years 1 month ago
I hate love poems
But this is a fucking superb one.
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
Jess,
Thanks for the "fucking superb" for you to state that in your comment it means a lot to me. especial the "fucking" that made it one notch higher then superb.
thank you very much!
truth is all I need regardless if sometimes it hurts.
Eddie
Candlewitch
14 years 1 month ago
Dear Eddie,
Your love shines through every line! This piece resonates with me, probably because I have the love of my life with me and no matter how long we are together, the time will seem too short. I understand just how you feel!!!
always, Cat
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
Cat
I am so happy you could relate to this write, it's always a pleasure to see you on my page.
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
eph,
Hey you, thanks for the visit and heart felt comment. See you are Buddy.
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
14 years 1 month ago
Lonnie
Love seems to inspire so much poetry, and it is so nic to have ones peers recognize it.
Thanks Bud, I do appreciate your wonderful comment.
Eddie
wesley snow
13 years 10 months ago
This deserves a melody.
Besides the fact that you eschew punctuation, I still like this a lot. The chorus works. Now, it may be that I'm so stuck on my wife that I was a sucker for the sentimentality of it, but I still like it.
wesley
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
wesley
glad you liked it, I am a romantic and will always be.
thanks for the visit.
Eddie