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Aug 29, 2011
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Every Song
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
Can you hear it too
Life has been
like a beautiful Love song
Since I heard the sweet tones
Which flowed from your lips
Making me feel alive once again
My heart now dances
Where before you came
It had forgotten the steps
With you I will stay
Until the end of my days
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
It is spring forever
As long as I am with you
I am the tree
And you are the mockingbird
That sings just for me
When ever I need you
Or wish to embrace you
I look to the music
Where I always hear you
Right here in my head
Oh how I love you
Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
LMFAO!
I'm just in love and I don't drink. I guess if I did, I would love my pint too, but I am truly intoxicated with Jonette.
Thanks for the read.
Eddie
lou
13 years 10 months ago
Eddie
Oh to be in love !!!!!
I enjoyed this poem emensly although it was a little mushy, and romantic, for my usual tastes.. I liked the fact you used a song to evoke your feelings.
Ps does she know about the belt? LMAO!!!
Lou
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
lou
She has a belt she beats me with. Funny thing is, I like it. LMFAO!!
NO, she does not know anything about the belt joke.
thanks for the read, and comment.
Eddie
weirdelf
13 years 10 months ago
I hate love poems
But this is a fucking superb one.
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
Jess,
Thanks for the "fucking superb" for you to state that in your comment it means a lot to me. especial the "fucking" that made it one notch higher then superb.
thank you very much!
truth is all I need regardless if sometimes it hurts.
Eddie
Candlewitch
13 years 10 months ago
Dear Eddie,
Your love shines through every line! This piece resonates with me, probably because I have the love of my life with me and no matter how long we are together, the time will seem too short. I understand just how you feel!!!
always, Cat
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
Cat
I am so happy you could relate to this write, it's always a pleasure to see you on my page.
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
eph,
Hey you, thanks for the visit and heart felt comment. See you are Buddy.
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 10 months ago
Lonnie
Love seems to inspire so much poetry, and it is so nic to have ones peers recognize it.
Thanks Bud, I do appreciate your wonderful comment.
Eddie
wesley snow
13 years 7 months ago
This deserves a melody.
Besides the fact that you eschew punctuation, I still like this a lot. The chorus works. Now, it may be that I'm so stuck on my wife that I was a sucker for the sentimentality of it, but I still like it.
wesley
Eduardo Cruz
13 years 7 months ago
wesley
glad you liked it, I am a romantic and will always be.
thanks for the visit.
Eddie