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Tessadiana
Dec 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

the perfect poem

Sometimes you see a poemThat truly takes yourBreathVoiceHeartAwaySometimesYou can’t wait to see a poem that is similarBut can’t be too the sameBecause when you read duplicatesYou don’t have the ecstasyOf that first poem Sometimes its only once you feel thisBut you never forgetSometimes its by a famous authorSometimes from a loved oneAnd even sometimes you are just looking through manyAnd one caches your eyeAnd that is always in your heartBut we appreciate it only
sometimes
— Tessadiana, Dec 05, 2008
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Tessadiana

17 years 6 months ago

thank

thanks babe its so nice to say i actually just finished writing a poem on homophobia(im no homosexual myself but i am a big supporter of gay rights )i hope you see it i love the feedback Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"
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Lonnie

17 years 6 months ago

Hey there, Tessa!

I fully agree with DarkPurple, a most awesome poem indeed! You are really growing as a poet, young Lady! Congrats!
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Tessadiana

17 years 6 months ago

thanks

thank you lonnie MC lonister lol check back for my poem im adding tomarow i enjoy it very much Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Hi Tessadiana,

The theme of your poem seems to coincide with a belief which I have held for many years, which is that a minority of poems really get to us in a way that prose cannot do. Personally, I usually only find a few such poems in any book of poetry I read, and sometimes none at all, but they are worth searching for. Best wishes, Robert.
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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

oh why thank you

thanks for you comments Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"
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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

thanks alot

thanks i love your compliment Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"

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