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Tessadiana
Dec 14, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

shallow thoughts

I stare at a mirror so shallow

When I see my eyes are callow

I do some looks

And read some books

While I see I do not lose my looks of a rose mallow
— Tessadiana, Dec 14, 2008
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orgami

17 years 5 months ago

on christmas day

jumping over poems driving past residents i see and know and have commented on had to back up and take a look at your work am remembering classes the teacher going round commenting on created works asking students from a very extreme cross refrence of geographical and economic difference to read aloud poems amazed at the power and strength the words conveyed by so many I am amazed at your poems from the hip shots words tasered like spray gun graffitti on wheeled performance artist delivery my mind spins with this poem im glad I stopped thank you
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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

uumm thanks

thanks for you comments need to dumb it down it down a bit Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"

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