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Nature Mithya
Dec 20, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sheltered Dream

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— Nature Mithya, Dec 20, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Hi nature

I find the first stanza obscure (especially the word 'sheltered') but the rest of the poem seems to describe a memorable scene in a night club. I like the ironic ending. Best wishes, Robert.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Contest entry where the judge is "Sheltered"...

The person usually enjoys if poets bash him up with poetry about him.Here he said he loved being stripped. So the poem. Thanks for reading and maybe i get a gold, silver or Bronze from him as a memento. Lol Thanks for your comments.

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