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Dec 20, 2008
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Emotional void
crystal icicles
fell on the hill
which we used to climb
without shadows
to disturb our walk
you tore me
with your frozen hand
whispering shards of ignorance
you suffered
in the arms of the cold light
with the sadness drowned
in my soul
hanging your glance
those eyes looked
as if they were an ocean of purity
and the sound of your voice
broke my inner silence
like Prometheus I brought fire
at your head board
to melt the growlers
and the drifts
that grew within your heart
bare of sap
I fade like a torch
by the harsh blizzard
through your volatile love
fell on the hill
which we used to climb
without shadows
to disturb our walk
you tore me
with your frozen hand
whispering shards of ignorance
you suffered
in the arms of the cold light
with the sadness drowned
in my soul
hanging your glance
those eyes looked
as if they were an ocean of purity
and the sound of your voice
broke my inner silence
like Prometheus I brought fire
at your head board
to melt the growlers
and the drifts
that grew within your heart
bare of sap
I fade like a torch
by the harsh blizzard
through your volatile love
— Unlight, Dec 20, 2008
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Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Fascinating pictures of ice
Unlight
17 years 5 months ago
Sorry for the late answer
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Been wondering where you´d gotten to...
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