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into the realm of faeries

i went away
into the night
broken wings
broken heart
broken life
i went away
from my love
lots of tears
lots of mistakes
lots of hate
i went to fay
the realm of faeries
where i could live
with my own
in my true form
away from iron
when it burns
away from my love
no i cant think like that
i must live
must not put her life in danger
if i love her
i must keep away
no matter what my heart wants
now its with you
you
i must keep my mind from coming back to you
to your
voice
smell
touch
no
never shall i see you again
for i am not human
my fragile one
my love
— Tessadiana, Dec 23, 2008

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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

thx

hahah thx kel (may i call you kel it seems nice) i will have to change the title thank you for informing me i appreciate ur comment happy holidays Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"
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orgami

17 years 5 months ago

once again

your latest poem I find it well written expressing emoting your words falling into place like magic after two re-reads but worth the study making me take note I applaud your poem And Merry Christmas

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