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Nature Mithya
Dec 24, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Bonded Temptation

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— Nature Mithya, Dec 24, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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DarkinAZ

17 years 5 months ago

Very discriptive...

I only hope it is fictional, indeed, desires of the flesh will snare the soul with the talons of the damned. Breaking all moral reasoning, becoming a beast, as regard for others is deemed insignificant, your soul rots. Captivating write, -DarkinAz-
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

A mistress sends you a Christmas present...

... a beautiful jinx to have fun and you have to write a poem on what you do with her;is the theme. Link:-http://allpoetry.com/contest/2431229. This poem was written keeping in mind what it would do to me. The Picture in the contest is lovely hope you can click and ascertain the facts.

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