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Tessadiana
Dec 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

challenge

look in the mirror
another day
another challenge
pretty scary
pretty weird
no one else has this problem
"what the hell"
up down up down
"just stop
please"
u can't be controlled
your such a bipolar"
i cry
cry some more
why do i live with you?


i whimper
"i hate my hair"
— Tessadiana, Dec 25, 2008
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deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Merry Christmas Tessa

What do you like to be called? This is so funny--something we can all relate to, even the guys, I bet. I'm not totally sure about the title. The poem seems funnier than that. I loved 'up down up down' before I knew it was hair you were talking about. What a nice surprise. Yours Dee
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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

hey

merry christmas tessa is fine hahaha thanks fro the compliments Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

Tess,

I was fooled by the ending of this, "I hate my hair" you sneaky devil you!! I still see a hidden meaning to the hair. As we see ourselves in the mirror every day before we go out into the world, we are either UP or DOWN and it's what dictates our day and how we face our life. I guess we are all bipolar in a sense!! thanks for the trickery I truly enjoyed this write!!!! Eddie
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Tessadiana

17 years 5 months ago

thanks

thanks for you comments Tessadiana<3 "love is so many things but one of them is you"

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