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Dec 28, 2008
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Mother
She felt moments of rapture
at the sight of a robin, a snowdrop,
primroses, bluebells, a squirrel,
an ancient oak
and so much else,
in gardens, woods or fields.
Her sensibility did much to make up
for unceasing, unfair criticism
of my dutiful, patient father.
She desperately needed company
but as a housewife, was alone,
till dad got home, exhausted
from London and commuting.
In the mornings, those who delivered
milk, eggs, bread or whatever
were invited in for tea or coffee,
home-made cake or biscuits.
In return, they chatted.
If they had done that everywhere,
they wouldn't have finished their rounds.
Neighbours may have been suspicious
at how long their vans were parked
outside our warm, tense home.
But all she needed was to talk.
at the sight of a robin, a snowdrop,
primroses, bluebells, a squirrel,
an ancient oak
and so much else,
in gardens, woods or fields.
Her sensibility did much to make up
for unceasing, unfair criticism
of my dutiful, patient father.
She desperately needed company
but as a housewife, was alone,
till dad got home, exhausted
from London and commuting.
In the mornings, those who delivered
milk, eggs, bread or whatever
were invited in for tea or coffee,
home-made cake or biscuits.
In return, they chatted.
If they had done that everywhere,
they wouldn't have finished their rounds.
Neighbours may have been suspicious
at how long their vans were parked
outside our warm, tense home.
But all she needed was to talk.
— Robert Melliard, Dec 28, 2008
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miss kristale
17 years 5 months ago
i always like to talk and
Robert Melliard
17 years 5 months ago
Suspicion
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