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Mother

She felt moments of rapture
at the sight of a robin, a snowdrop,
primroses, bluebells, a squirrel,
an ancient oak
and so much else,
in gardens, woods or fields.

Her sensibility did much to make up
for unceasing, unfair criticism
of my dutiful, patient father.

She desperately needed company
but as a housewife,  was alone,
till dad got home, exhausted
from London and commuting.

In the mornings, those who delivered
milk, eggs, bread or whatever
were invited in for tea or coffee,
home-made cake or biscuits.

In return, they chatted.

If they had done that everywhere,
they wouldn't have finished their rounds.

Neighbours may have been suspicious
at how long their vans were parked
outside our warm, tense home.

But all she needed was to talk.
— Robert Melliard, Dec 28, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: Asturias, Spain

Favorite Poets: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Du Bellay, Metaphysicals, Petrarch, Dante, Baudelaire, Lorca, Becquer, Coleridge

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MK

miss kristale

17 years 5 months ago

i always like to talk and

i always like to talk and yes it could raise suspition when in a relationship like that when your man is at work
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Suspicion

I wasn't sure about that stanza when I wrote this poem, because life seemed much more innocent back in the fifties, so I may be seeing my childhood memories through modern eyes and unfairly accusing my one-time neighbours of having been suspicious. Thanks for your comment, and I'll try to read a poem of yours, too. Best Wishes, Robert. .

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