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Dec 29, 2008
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Let Me Go
Don't hold my heart in,
I don't want to be trapped.
Under deep dark seas,
with no way out.
Don't hold my hand,
like a little child.
I don't need your pity,
I don't need your doubt.
Don't keep me locked up,
in this one small box.
Don't leave me here,
only to wait for my death.
Just let me go,
let me out.
I don't want to be trapped.
Under deep dark seas,
with no way out.
Don't hold my hand,
like a little child.
I don't need your pity,
I don't need your doubt.
Don't keep me locked up,
in this one small box.
Don't leave me here,
only to wait for my death.
Just let me go,
let me out.
— Mistyone, Dec 29, 2008
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Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Nice flow to this
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