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Dec 29, 2008
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the world
one day we shall see
the beauty in each others eyes
we shall touch the souls of one anouther
and understand each others cries
one day we will hope
as the world proceeds
we will build the briges we crashed down
and care for each others needs
one moment that this will appear
all around our home
we will notice the faith
and never be left alone
one day we will all ruin this
with the war that comes in place
we will make tears for our loved ones
this will discontinue all the chase
we share this moment hand in hand
and ruin it apart
no one will see the beauty for long
but we might make the best of this first start
the beauty in each others eyes
we shall touch the souls of one anouther
and understand each others cries
one day we will hope
as the world proceeds
we will build the briges we crashed down
and care for each others needs
one moment that this will appear
all around our home
we will notice the faith
and never be left alone
one day we will all ruin this
with the war that comes in place
we will make tears for our loved ones
this will discontinue all the chase
we share this moment hand in hand
and ruin it apart
no one will see the beauty for long
but we might make the best of this first start
— Tessadiana, Dec 29, 2008
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Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Good write Diana
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