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CHERISHED BAOBAB TREE

CHERISHED BAOBAB TREE The colour of my skin is stainedWith an orange circle round my mouthEach time I take a sip of Fanta drinkThe colour of my skin is not buffNeither crimson nor cerise but mixedAnd with a tint of blonde on my head The colour of my skin is not difficult to tellWhen I look at myself backward in the mirrorMy father’s skin is made darker by the sunAnd by charcoal when he sits by the fire placeThen turned grey with dust of the seasonLike the bark of our cherished baobab trees Baobab trees firmly rooted to mother earthHave lived for hundreds or a thousand yearsAnd witnessed the passing of many generationsTracing our long lineage to where it all beganWhile we cook the leaves with millet and peanutsAnd drink the juice of its fruits after benechin The cotton tree challenges the elephant treeBut can’t say no to baobab dotted everywhereWhose trunks hide the faces of people gone byAnd the secrets passed down by our ancestorsLet us dance round the cherished baobab treesFor our ancestors who died old were buried there The baobab tree shades it leaves in dry seasonAnd retains its water from drying out while it restsPreparing for the coming cycles of rain and floodMen built bantaba, the people’s congress, by the roadTo pass the messages across, as we learn with dismayWhat the baobab trees have seen, and wish we were there


  
— t. reflexion, Jan 02, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 5 months ago

T

I love reading your poems of your homeland, I always learn something from them. I enjoyed reading. Sincerely, Linda
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 5 months ago

Linda

Thank you for the reading and for the comment. I went to the Gambia and was fascinated by Baobab trees and the stories related to them. Best wishes. T.
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leonard daranjo

17 years 5 months ago

This poem exudes nostalgia

Through your poems you tell so much about your motherland that is so very interesting. You know I love Africa, its culture, its flora and fauna. I feel it is one of God's great gifts to the earth. Cheers ... Leonard
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 5 months ago

West Africa

Yes, the Gambia is on the west coast of Africa and it attracts a lot of tourists because of the find weather during the dry season. You can try it sometime in the future. Thank you for the reading and for the comment. T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 5 months ago

Dark Purple

I am find, and you? Actually I wrote this poem as if my son was the one talking. His skin colour is lighter than mine and Fanta makes an orange mark on his lips always. Thank you for the reading and for the comment. T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 5 months ago

Yes...

I recognize you, even in my dreams, I cannot miss my friends and you are one of them. This society of Dead poets, is it an organization open for membership? please advise and best wishes. T.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Hi T...

I enjoyed the images evoked within this poem... written from the heart to the page! Richard
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 5 months ago

Richard

Thank you for being there and for encouraging my scribbles and for the comments. Best wishes. T.
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easylife_2

17 years 5 months ago

Mr T

Very vivid imagery ,always making me weak at my knees.Thank you for this one.

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