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Jan 08, 2009
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The tide is high
not low
the world was round
not flat as you know
the time was near
not something that
you know by ear
the world is there
although it can be here
the wind was cold
blowing freezing
my mind was clear
and my nose was sneezing
not low
the world was round
not flat as you know
the time was near
not something that
you know by ear
the world is there
although it can be here
the wind was cold
blowing freezing
my mind was clear
and my nose was sneezing
— Fleur MacDonald, Jan 08, 2009
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weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
Yes it is cute.
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