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Jan 08, 2009
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wise oak tree
wise oak tree show me the way
i do not seek my destiny
and can not do it today
wondrous field mouse talk to me please
tell me your worries
set mine at ease
peaceful Lily i look to you know
be my hearts whim or
just let be forced to bow
i do not seek my destiny
and can not do it today
wondrous field mouse talk to me please
tell me your worries
set mine at ease
peaceful Lily i look to you know
be my hearts whim or
just let be forced to bow
— Tessadiana, Jan 08, 2009
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prettyprincess
17 years 5 months ago
i liked it especially the
Lonnie
17 years 5 months ago
Good job, Tessa!
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