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Random Crap

Random Crap

Is your vision
What I see?

A wrong word?
A pile that's steaming?
maybe a foul smell
or loss of a friend?

Vampire,
God,
Angel
Warrior?

Love,
Hate,
Heart,
Soul?

Your random crap
Is my poetic license
to open my eyes and see
then pen the vision to paper
To share with you.

        Written by Tink (in chat) 1/8/09 10:20pm

— Tink, Jan 08, 2009

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Region, Country: Pennsylvania, USA

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Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Way to go Tink!

I love that write. Anything can be paint for the poets canvas! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 5 months ago

Cool! Quite turned my head

Cool! Quite turned my head for a moment, thought you were having a serious go at someone. A really edgy poem and those one word lines really punched it out! Remember how I didn't think the short lines worked for "Looking In"? They do here. cheers, Jess
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 5 months ago

Deb

One person's crap is another person's treasure (or something to that effect) Here's the one I wrote about you: (can't remember the original, so this is as close as I could come to it) Stinky Tink went to the loo with the intent to take a poo and while she stared at the grout she pushed so hard, a poem popped out! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"And he talks to the river of lost love and dedication And silent replies that swirl invitation Flow dark and troubled to an oily sea A grim intimation of what is to be" - Pink Floyd
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LissaMine

17 years 3 months ago

So much to inspire us...

Even if it is just random crap...makes for a good read Lissa I hold it true, whatever befall; I feel it, when I sorrow most; 'Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all.

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