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Red Light

With each breath full of attitude,
as if everything she does is right;
with one last check in the mirror
she dissipates into the night.

Wearing an extra coat of make-up
she avoids harsh, unkind light.

A student of the twilight,
she knows her way around.
She's feisty, and a fighter,
maybe the best, pound for pound.

She's on display for the regulars,
and the ones that had her crowned.

It doesn't make a difference
where she's at, or the city's name;
her caliber of clientele
is sub-par and all the same.

Her main objectives are getting paid,
and making sure they're glad they came.

Evening make-up and evening wear
are her curse, when the day does dawn,
she constantly has to watch her back
so she's not taken by a "john".

She also does her level best,
not to end up as if a pawn..

— docmaverick, Jan 15, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 4 months ago

Red Light

Doc, What an awesome write here! The only word I didn't care for is "lawn" A darker word ,I believe would fit better here. Just a friendly suggestion Doc~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

I changed it.......

...and I hope it works for you. I'm an amiable guy, just let me know if this works for you... ..Yours truly, Doc Maverick. #{:>{)+
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 4 months ago

Red Light

Doc, That is the exact word I had in mind, but didn't want to put my word in your poem. Excellent! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

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