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Jan 17, 2009
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Once apon I time I truly am insane
The doctors always said there was something wrong with my brain
I look with my mouth and feel with my ears but no worry can I see
But every ones looking like im not gonna be a sad scene
Im happy here I scream aloud
But only in my brain responds
All the characters in my room
Are all to busy to belong
So I pray another day
To the pop can god I made
And that’s just the beginging
Of a life that’s surly tame
This room is to white I tell lucy
The girl that comes and goes
She nods her head and says goodbye
Wow what lovely toes
They truly seek the beauty
They truly seek and find
But truly I don’t see
Anything wrong happening with my mind
— Tessadiana, Jan 17, 2009
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W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
Hahaha poem
orgami
17 years 4 months ago
You write well
poewriter58
17 years 4 months ago
Tess
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