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Jan 21, 2009
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almost murderer ,my first kill, and my love all in one
blood
seeking down
singing to my heart
loving in my head
blood seeking from my almost murderer
my love sometimes
my enemy some days
once dancing
then fighting
then done
and nothing is done
and nothing but your life is gone
and that knife i used against you
stabbed into my heart
too
and i kiss
your dead face
and cry
on your dead cheek
cause now
your not my almost murderer
right now my love is dead
sleep now my lovely
into life you dont belong
and the blood dripping on the floor
is both our love songs
seeking down
singing to my heart
loving in my head
blood seeking from my almost murderer
my love sometimes
my enemy some days
once dancing
then fighting
then done
and nothing is done
and nothing but your life is gone
and that knife i used against you
stabbed into my heart
too
and i kiss
your dead face
and cry
on your dead cheek
cause now
your not my almost murderer
right now my love is dead
sleep now my lovely
into life you dont belong
and the blood dripping on the floor
is both our love songs
— Tessadiana, Jan 21, 2009
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weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
Strong strong allegory (I
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