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Formal Affair

 

Stone dead

The body lays bare

As the flies

Are drawing near

 

The stench came by

Horrible and gross

It's the death

The mortician

Loves the most

 

This body was living

No kiss good-bye

And now it’s dead

A family will cry

 

A farewell to you

As you go down

Death chose you

A way to drown

 


— Shadowteller, Jan 28, 2009

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 4 months ago

Formal Affair

my friend Strange title I know of this place only too well. I like the flow of this poem but the content close to my heart the loss of loved ones still hurt now. So sad am I Electricblue

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