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A VISIT TO IN-LAWS

A VISIT TO IN-LAWS   Our Arts teacher, humble and kind Married a young beautiful wife On Sunday, sixteenth September The year of our Lord, the son   He arranged a visit to the in-laws To show appreciation and joy He soaked cassava tubers for six days And on the seventh, he cleaned them up   The cassava water smelled so bad The offensive odour was nothing to him As he cooked and pounded the fufu Then wrapped it with large plantain leaves   Cassava fufu on the back of his bike A giant mascot football for world soccer Rolled off the tandem on the hill of Atamong The teacher dropped the cycle and ran after   He tried to stop the ball with his leg Cassava circled left and rolled faster He ran in front, turned and took a dive The cassava looped right and rolled on   O! My God, you need to see the expression On his face that fateful and unforgettable day When cassava ball veered from the bridge And dropped into the fast flowing river   He had an agreement with the in-laws Prepare the soup, I will bring the fufu So when he was sighted without the stuff They poured the hot pot of soup on him


 
— t. reflexion, Jan 28, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 4 months ago

wow

I wouldn't want in-laws like that! Is this based on fact?? ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, piss on it and walk away!"
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 4 months ago

No...

it is a story told by a particular masquerade, 'Ekpri-Akata', some years back. sometime, this masquerade came out only in the night. Thanks for the reading and for the comment. Best wishes. T.

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