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The Autumn of Life
With heightened urge to swim and splash
To the nearby river, with its twists and bends
In warm summer evening of Uttar Pradesh
A child sets out with a group of friends
The flowing water and its blissful rinse
The currents and waves and their silky flow
Climbing their shoulders and reaching their chins
The ecstasy causing the faces to glow
Oblivious of risks, bubbling with zeal
Knowing not a storm could mount a siege
The fury and rage could serenity steal
Ignorant that scenery could turn a page
You and I are riding the quick sand of time
The turbulent river of life is in spate
We know not that we could be victims prime
Oblivious of meeting a devastating fate
Is there a spring of autumn of life?
Where is the promised mercy’s floodgate?
Is our destiny anguish and strife?
O Saviour’s Benign Hands! How long to wait?
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Critiques
W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
Autumn...life... poem
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
Yamin,
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 4 months ago
WAMPLER
rahbar
17 years 4 months ago
Man can not forget his roots.
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 4 months ago
UNFORGETABLE ROOTS
Conect11
17 years 4 months ago
I too have tears
rahbar
17 years 3 months ago
wonderfull.
nokros
17 years 4 months ago
The Autumn of Life
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 4 months ago
Mark W
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 4 months ago
Nokros
Linda Moses
17 years 3 months ago
Mohammad
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 3 months ago
Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 3 months ago
Mohammad
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 2 months ago
Linda
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