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Feb 01, 2009
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Herself
(Found this old poem when *organizing stuff*.)
Herself
She had returned from the past
with the present on her mind...
lovingly etched
in her Bodhisattvic smile,
the forest path ran
long golden fingers
through her hair,
and
the river of no return
was running down
like silver moonlight
from her eyes,
the ocean roared like a lion,
then quieted
like a lamb,
Bliss
was simply enjoying her Self.
Herself
She had returned from the past
with the present on her mind...
lovingly etched
in her Bodhisattvic smile,
the forest path ran
long golden fingers
through her hair,
and
the river of no return
was running down
like silver moonlight
from her eyes,
the ocean roared like a lion,
then quieted
like a lamb,
Bliss
was simply enjoying her Self.
— Kailashana, Feb 01, 2009
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Critiques
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
I’ve taken an assignment
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
*lol* I know what you mean,
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
hehehe… must be a British
Stella
17 years 4 months ago
Oh my God Anna, it IS a
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Is this what it will be like
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Arrow, for you: The Heart
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Hmmm...
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Got it.
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 4 months ago
A beatiful thought has been
Kailashana
17 years 4 months ago
Namaste*. The most
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