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R.M.Shanmugam
Feb 06, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hollows

I like the people after they have toldMe what I think it is I want to hear.I tell the people what they think it isThey want to hear so that I’ll be liked.02.08.2007 
— R.M.Shanmugam, Feb 06, 2009
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Wuzz

17 years 4 months ago

Hollows

How true it is for most of us! I like this little poem, and I'm not just saying that so you will like me!
Mark

Mark

17 years 4 months ago

Ha Ha

Sounds like a lot of phony balogna. And a lot of ass kissing LOOL. Nice done with those few extra words :) If I could ever summarize the sum, I would retire and grow tangerines. Mark

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