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splendour in ze past

what should I do pixie?
tell me what is new pixie
TINKERBELL.


did I fuck it up tinkerbell?
did I fuck it up lion heart?
did I fuck it up cinderella?

as she stared at the star
imagining what it couldn't be,
what isn't possible,
how it's not true,
and the grass on her back
stained.


feeding text message
into algarhythyms
isn't worked
hasn't working.

— goatman, Feb 06, 2009

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