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Think Like a Child (Sonnet Trilogy 3)

Time left me long ago—No time to wait,

he said.  Weighty bills are a mountain piled,

he said—delivery must not be late.

Forget it, then, I will think like a child.

From my bedroom window, I watch cloud-like

beasts chase cotton candy dogs and kittens.

Vapors float on silver and gold; shroud-like

curtains flap in tune to ceaseless knitting.

My new best friend is the man in the moon,

at tide’s end, nothing but a silly grin,

pale, too, at morning’s sun, gone by high-noon.

Together we frolic, his yang, my yin.

Time stops dead in its tracks, now stands so still.

Doves drift down and land on my window sill.


— deelilah, Feb 07, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 4 months ago

Dee

Love it!!!! I will never grow up either. I liked the part in your poem about the clouds, I thought I was the only one who still did that...... Thanks for the cotton candy dogs and cats, you made my day. Patty
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Patty

Thanks for the comment. I've been thinking a lot about those days when I would lie on my back and watch the clouds change shape. Of course it would be easier to do in the summer--a little hard and cold right now. Happy Valentines Day. Yours, D.
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 3 months ago

Dee

Had a great valentines day, hope you did also...... Patty

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