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Feb 07, 2009
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Think Like a Child (Sonnet Trilogy 3)
Time left me long ago—No time to wait,
he said. Weighty bills are a mountain piled,
he said—delivery must not be late.
Forget it, then, I will think like a child.
From my bedroom window, I watch cloud-like
beasts chase cotton candy dogs and kittens.
Vapors float on silver and gold; shroud-like
curtains flap in tune to ceaseless knitting.
My new best friend is the man in the moon,
at tide’s end, nothing but a silly grin,
pale, too, at morning’s sun, gone by high-noon.
Together we frolic, his yang, my yin.
Time stops dead in its tracks, now stands so still.
Doves drift down and land on my window sill.
— deelilah, Feb 07, 2009
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