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Geremia

Feb 08, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A LOVE SONG

A LOVE SONG

Feel the velvet of my touch
Feel the silk of my embrace
Feel my flesh hard and tight
Hold you gently through the night
Feel my fire
Release its flow
Let me bring you to that special place
Hold my heart
Take my soul
Let me be
Your only one
Your love'
Your life
Your ecstasy

— Geremia, Feb 08, 2009

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yenti

17 years 3 months ago

A LOVE SONG

You have sung so sweetly, but a little short for me young man, not sure what to say with this write, but just keep on writing, Yours Ian.T

17 years 3 months ago

Love is sweet- but all too short :)

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks again, Ian. Especially for that "young" man part!!! :) Joe

17 years 3 months ago

Wow!

Just wow. its a difficult theme to express. Ann

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