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Feb 09, 2009
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seperation
the bleakness is a bomb
the darkness is hymn
the service went too long
my feet have become numb
my brain box has come dumb
have we succumb?
the darkness is hymn
the service went too long
my feet have become numb
my brain box has come dumb
have we succumb?
— goatman, Feb 09, 2009
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Mark
16 years 3 months ago
ha..I love this gem
the_fool
16 years 3 months ago
yes
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