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I Am...

Just as a child learns a lesson,
because the stove was very hot
or the child finally realizes that possessions
are not safe in the driveway;

or just as the tempo escalates
as the symphony reaches the vista of the overture
leaving behind one of the sweetest of melodies;

and just like after a storm has left too much damage in it's wake
maybe even...sometimes, serious destruction,
all because it hit a location
too fragile for it's very own existence;

or just as a father or husband,
after having missed the "celebration"
due to the overtimes, and business trips, in life..........I am forgiven, for now.
— docmaverick, Feb 09, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Mark

Mark

17 years 4 months ago

LOL Lucky you

And best of luck in the future, Doc. The sour grapes leave me with sour taste but love understands, yes? If I could ever summarize the sum, I would retire and grow tangerines. Mark
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

Hey Mark...

....I know this piece was a bit "abstract", but why such an equally abstract comment ? I don't understand the, "...best luck in the future, Doc."; am I going some where ? I DO know that, your quite an indepth thinker...so, it may be that your comment is flat-out, "over my head". At any rate, thanks for reading. That's a positive comment in itself. Always L.O.L.! #{:>{)}@=== doc.
Mark

Mark

17 years 4 months ago

Gee Doc

I was so into this poem thought you were writing about some bad time for you. Thought someone forgave you for being alone. I was just saying good luck with a good thing hapening now. Guess I perceived it all wrong. Oh well, that seems to be me, sometimes I'm spot on sometimes off the wall. If I could ever summarize the sum, I would retire and grow tangerines. Mark
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

Naw Mark...

....I'm not going through anything, I was merely saying that, in the Grand Scheme of things...I am forgiven; and I'm grateful, too. Remember, stupid is...as stupid types. L.O.L.! #{:>{)}@==doc.
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 4 months ago

Naw Mark...

....I'm not going through anything, I was merely saying that, in the Grand Scheme of things...I am forgiven; and I'm grateful, too. Remember, stupid is...as stupid types. L.O.L.! #{:>{)}@== doc.

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