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Feb 09, 2009
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I Am...
Just as a child learns a lesson,
because the stove was very hot
or the child finally realizes that possessions
are not safe in the driveway;
or just as the tempo escalates
as the symphony reaches the vista of the overture
leaving behind one of the sweetest of melodies;
and just like after a storm has left too much damage in it's wake
maybe even...sometimes, serious destruction,
all because it hit a location
too fragile for it's very own existence;
or just as a father or husband,
after having missed the "celebration"
due to the overtimes, and business trips, in life..........I am forgiven, for now.
because the stove was very hot
or the child finally realizes that possessions
are not safe in the driveway;
or just as the tempo escalates
as the symphony reaches the vista of the overture
leaving behind one of the sweetest of melodies;
and just like after a storm has left too much damage in it's wake
maybe even...sometimes, serious destruction,
all because it hit a location
too fragile for it's very own existence;
or just as a father or husband,
after having missed the "celebration"
due to the overtimes, and business trips, in life..........I am forgiven, for now.
— docmaverick, Feb 09, 2009
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Mark
17 years 4 months ago
LOL Lucky you
docmaverick
17 years 4 months ago
Hey Mark...
Mark
17 years 4 months ago
Gee Doc
docmaverick
17 years 4 months ago
Naw Mark...
docmaverick
17 years 4 months ago
Naw Mark...
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