Museling

Hither knave, come nigh to me,
wrest thine thoughts 'til hearts agree;
heed the lesson pride won't teach,
practise what thou fiercely preach.

Turnest thou thine fertile tome:
another leaf, another poem;
steady on 'til light of day,
only purest thoughts will stay.

— crypticbard, Feb 14, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows., I am because we are

Critiques

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Well

having written as bid then we await the next, when the writing is blossoming twix that old land and this old ear, so that men and maidens who read those things, can post a message here, Yours Ian.T

Frederick Kesner

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks.

Thanks for those kind words. Although it wasn’t written in the former tongue in all strictness of the word or syntax had provided a feel that somehow bridged both realities. I am pleased that it has stirred you enough to interact with its ‘creator.’ And again, I thank you, kind sir.

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Ah, tis archaic

but methinks, so be I and mine friend Ian. Forsooth, tis seeming that we both carest for thine words! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein

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