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Arctic Wisdom

"There's three kinds of cold",
my guide opined, "but only two
you have to worry about."

on the edge of arctic,
the rim of night's freeze nipping
at our lives

we stood beside the icy
idling tractor relieving our bladders
after hours of travel

"one is when it hits the ground
and freezes:
that's called cold"

I looked down at my puddle
"so its cold."
he nodded.

"two is when it freezes
on the way down
that's called colder."

"what about the third" I asked
as we climbed back inside
the tractor's fragile warmth

He threw it into gear: we lurched away.
"three is when it freezes
as its coming out."

"and what's that third one called?"
he shrugged and lit a cigarette
"we call that dead."
— Race_9togo, Feb 15, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Jim...

your arctic guide is so right... still smiling, I think I'll read it again... so it's cold... loved the picture! Richard
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

LOL

Thanks "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Jim

Neat story poem. I'm pretty sure we were in the 2nd kind of cold a few weeks back in South Dakota. The diesel fuel froze up and the truck stopped running (too much animal fat, or corn fat, or whatever fat we're mandated to add), luckily by a motel, so we didn't have to test out that theory. It was -22, -40 with windchill. Unbelievable. Deelilah
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Deelilah

It hit us here too, about a month ago. Driving home from work, I don't think I've ever seen more frozen trucks on the expressway. Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 3 months ago

Nice, Jim

Light-hearted, and funny, but oh so true. We measure it by how bad the word is which precedes it: man, it's cold... damn, it's cold... and f***, it's cold! Or at least that's how I measure it.... ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"As you slide down the banister of life, may the splinters never point in the wrong direction!" -"God is good, but never dance in a small boat."
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

:)

Glad you enjoyed it! An excellent picture of you and hubby, by the way Congrats Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 3 months ago

Jim,

this is a delight! thank you for sharing! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) your Proprietress

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