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Feb 15, 2009
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Arctic Wisdom
"There's three kinds of cold",
my guide opined, "but only two
you have to worry about."
on the edge of arctic,
the rim of night's freeze nipping
at our lives
we stood beside the icy
idling tractor relieving our bladders
after hours of travel
"one is when it hits the ground
and freezes:
that's called cold"
I looked down at my puddle
"so its cold."
he nodded.
"two is when it freezes
on the way down
that's called colder."
"what about the third" I asked
as we climbed back inside
the tractor's fragile warmth
He threw it into gear: we lurched away.
"three is when it freezes
as its coming out."
"and what's that third one called?"
he shrugged and lit a cigarette
"we call that dead."
my guide opined, "but only two
you have to worry about."
on the edge of arctic,
the rim of night's freeze nipping
at our lives
we stood beside the icy
idling tractor relieving our bladders
after hours of travel
"one is when it hits the ground
and freezes:
that's called cold"
I looked down at my puddle
"so its cold."
he nodded.
"two is when it freezes
on the way down
that's called colder."
"what about the third" I asked
as we climbed back inside
the tractor's fragile warmth
He threw it into gear: we lurched away.
"three is when it freezes
as its coming out."
"and what's that third one called?"
he shrugged and lit a cigarette
"we call that dead."
— Race_9togo, Feb 15, 2009
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Critiques
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Jim...
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
LOL
deelilah
17 years 3 months ago
Hi Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Deelilah
infinite_dwarf
17 years 3 months ago
Nice, Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
:)
Proprietress o…
17 years 3 months ago
Jim,
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