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Shadowteller
Feb 20, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Nonsense

None
Other,
Near to,
Sorrowful
Empathy,
Next to
Serious
Ethereal.


— Shadowteller, Feb 20, 2009

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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Shadowteller,

somehow I missed this until now...Shame, it is a good acrostic, and I enjoy acrostics a lot! Please do consider leaving out the commas. As you already have line breaks there, I feel that they are redundant in this piece. Regards, ~Nina
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Shadowteller

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks

Ink Dragon. I adjusted the poem to fix the problem.

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