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The Wolf and the Rose

The Wolf and the Rose

See the wolf with the rose
Trotting 'cross the field
Wonder what that wise one knows
And what his thoughts may yield

What prompted him to brave the thorn
The stem held gingerly
The cruel punctures he has borne
To carry such so tenderly

Nature sometimes plays us strange
With its twists and turns
That forest wolf on yonder plain -
And where his thoughts may yearn

Are they just of food and fun
Or is there something more?
Breaking from that trot to run
Let's see what is in store

Across the grasses em'rald green
Beyond an old deer's bones
He traipses through an icy stream
And over cold hard stones

To gently lay the petals red
Beside his mate within
Sitting back he cocks his head
To sing to moon and wind

Perhaps we are quite the same
The beasts called wolf and man
For it's love no matter their name
That both may understand

I have to give credit to my co-writer here. C. Thorne was one of the very first people I met on the internet back in the dark ages before internet exploiter came out and surfing was ruled by Navigator. We lose touch once in a while, but always manage to find each other again.
— Rett, Feb 20, 2009

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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JJ

Jacqueline Johnson

17 years 3 months ago

Trotting

I wouldn't use the exact word trotting cause i don't think any other animal besides horses trot i may be wrong but if it were me i would have chose a different word. Its a good poem though.
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Jaqueline

Thank you very much. I appreciate it a lot. Have you ever watched a wolf or a dog when they are traveling at more than a walk. They trot. The Native Americans watched them a lot and learned to imitate them if they needed to go a long distance at a faster pace than normal. They used a wolf trot. This consisted of jogging for a certain way and then walking for approximately the same distance. It allowed them to conserve more energy than jogging or running. That is why I used trotting. You may be correct though, maybe I need to use a different word. I will most assuredly give it some though. I appreciate your input and critique a lot and I thank you for taking the time to both read and offer your input. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Janice

Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Wolves trot and what a trot this is

Oh yes wolves and foxes definitely trot Jaqueline. Oh lovely sight, and can that be so, have you seen, or anyone seen this happen, I wonder what a wolf would see in a rose, or use it for? But why not, he is a noble beast and the fantasy of such a happening a magic painting of a reality within the poem penned here. Do tell us more. And if one needs to see the fox walk past a man close to, you must read one of my favourite books by an American "Beasts of the field" William J.Long. Oh how I learnt to love animals and nature from him in my childhood, to sit by the forest fire and hear he animals creeping nearer to peep. Some little bits here and there worried me, some here:- Perhaps we're made of quite the same ( this area) for 'tis love no matter its name ( not necessarily this but its not quite clear here I feel- even poetically) Respectfully Ann of Norway
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Ann

I will give it some thought. I appreciate it! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks a lot Double D

Did you know that unlike dogs, wolves mate for life? Nice interesting little tidbit. Running around naked? Wowser, I thought I was the only one who had done that! *LOL* Well. I hope hubby enjoyed getting jumped. *G* Glad that you enjoyed it and that it was clear for you. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Brilliant response DD & I totally agree

Excuse me for tresspassing dear Retts territory... I was on my way to join you in praising this work... but I must digress after reading this... What a brilliantly wonderful response & story & how divinely you express the conception of your daughter... a perfect poem in itself D.D ... "My daugther was brought from the star’s on a warm, clear, june, summer night next to porter creek."... & the hormone comment made me chuckle inside... What a gem you are, I shall have to go & read you now! Thanks for this Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
J

JWwildcat2012

17 years 3 months ago

Good subject to pick,Rett

Wolves are a great write in a poem.It is also a great write for fiction,as Jack London has proved.You did a great job with the poetic timing and vocabulary of the poem,and I will read other works you have done.I only hope you will read more of mine. Your friend in peace, Scott.
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Muchas Gracias Scott

As usual, you are correct. Wolves are always a good subject. Looking forward to the chance to read your offerings my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 3 months ago

Rett

Well done. two of my favorite things, wolves and roses
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

I appreciate it Linda

Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
press

press

17 years 3 months ago

The Wolf and the Rose the tile was so deep

This opened me up I see your words to think that a wolf would pick a rose and give it to his mate I should not be surprise at this a wolfs love is no less than a humans love I guess the targets of the wolf and the rose are so far a part and to see you put this together this is outstanding I will drink from this
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Press

Since Wolves mate for life, it was only a small step to add in the rose. So very glad you found this enjoyable. I sincerely thank you for the kind words. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
press

press

17 years 3 months ago

This is the beginning it is

This is the beginning it is late but I will add more Wild is this animal that walk with four feet The one love is food for his family to eat So he hunts to kill because this is what his family needs
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Absolutely right

And wolves NEVER kill for fun, only for food. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
T

Tink

17 years 3 months ago

Beautiful Write!

Damn, I forgot to post the first go 'round. The tenderness and love spillth over on this one! Males aren't near as tough as they pretend to be. Lucky is the female who has the male who is true to love, tenderness, intimacy, and strength to show his heart's love the truth in his heart and does what it takes to make her feel special. Beautiful beautiful write rett! Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

You are right Tink

Men are much more delicate in the really gory stuff than women. You women have to kind of baby us along. *S* We're also more romantic *wink* *LOL*! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Rett...

great rhyming all the way through this picturesque write! flowed like a song... well done! Now I have to share a picture this brought back from long ago, maybe I was twelve... some friends of my parent's gave them a dog, a wire haired terrier named Peanut... My dad kicked him out of the house in two days time... didn't see Peanut for a while, but one day me and a friend were sitting in a field, and across the field, there was Peanut with a corn-cob-pipe in his mouth... just strolling along... he came to me, but he wouldn't go back to the house... never did see him again, but I'll never forget the image of that dog...holding the pipe like he was smoking it... long winded I know, but it is your fault for placing the picture of the wolf holding the rose... lol... Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

*ROFLMAO* Now THAT would make

one hell of a picture. Great story Richard. I would have given a hundred dollars to see that! Vary glad you found this likable my friend. Very glad indeed. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
O

orgami

17 years 3 months ago

I liked the singing part

and I always bought some kind of blue flower Iris I think they were forgot about that every other years I buy flowers for Lori too when it gets warmer Just loved the "sing to moon and wind" yah they dont just howl they "sing"
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Absolutely Orgami

They sing! That is the truth. Wolves really are fascinating creatures. They can be dangerous or gentle and their mating is for life. Keep getting those flowers my friend. It shows you care. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
nokros

nokros

17 years 3 months ago

The Wolf and the Rose

'Nature sometimes plays us strange', did it for me - flows good, rhyming excellent - nothing wrong with meter. a very good write, but than... you are an old wolf at this. yours nokros
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

*LOL* Thanks Nokros

I have been called an old wolf a lot in the last few years. Thanks so much for your kind words sir. I truly appreciate them and I am very happy that you found this readable. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Love this one

Loping instead of trotting? I love wolves, myself. Not dangerous unless cornered, smarter than most anything else on four legs ( and many on TWO), won't take any BS from anybody and they do truly care for each other. Better a wolf on the summit than a sheep in the fold! Heehee A great write. Respectfully, Jim. P.S. You are a Zelazny fan...I KNEW there was a reason I like you! LOL "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Jim

I'll see what I can do with Loping. Perfect word. Yes, I like Zelazney, Heinlein, McCaffrey, Norton and several others. If you haven't read David Eddings Belgariad and Mallorean you have missed two great series. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." If government is the answer, it's a stupid question!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Loping with a line through the o is

running in Norwegian, its just a variation on the theme! I like your loping in the English sense, it has the nonchalance that the wolf demonstrates exactly Jim. The wolf is always under heavy debate here in Norway, sheep farmers on the one hand and conservationists on the other. How can we live with them is the question, even if we love them they do a lot of damage when they're hungry, as do the lynxes. The sound of them howling could be the symbol of the wilds it is so distinct and evocative of such isn't it? Difficult problem to solve. It still is good to read this Rett, I know where your heart lies. Yours Ann of Norway
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 3 months ago

Astounding poem Rett. Heard

Astounding poem Rett. Heard it being talked about on Chat, had to check it out. But my two favorite things to write of too are wolves and roses...hence u would like my poem Insensitive, as it has both images, the wolves the symbolism of coldness and loneliness and the roses a bed for the lost friend who deserved velvet for his resting place. I love the image of the wolf trotting across the emerald...intimate yet intriguing. Beautiful Beautiful. Peace and love Katie
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Katie

Thanks Katie, glad you enjoyed it. Wolves are full of symbolism in Native American culture also. I am looking forward to reading some of yours today. Trying to get caught up on a bit of my reading today. I will most assuredly get to yours today! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Ann

We have the same on-going discussion here. Wolves were re-introduced into Yellowstone park many years ago, and have done astonishingly well, so well in fact that they have left the park and are now roaming public lands in many states. Our solution for the damage that they do to livestock was to set up a government program that compensates farmers monetarily when wolves prey on their livestock. This has worked fairly well. It lets farmers get paid for livestock killed by wolves - money being what they are REALLY worried about - and of course it lets the wolves live too. All of this is taking places hundreds of miles away from me, but I do wish that the wolves would moved east towards us, so that I can hear them howl in the night! last time I heard a wolf howl in the wild was 30 years ago, in Spain! Ah, well, one can hope. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Jim

I love wolves, but like any wild animal, when they get too numerous in areas where people live they can play havoc with livestock and even family pets. They can also get overpopulated and start to starve and overbalance the ecology so their numbers need to be controlled. Here we are having trouble with wild dogs. A little over a month ago three of them attacked and killed our pet Weeny dog we had for 15 years. I killed two of them and one got away. I don't enjoy killing, but will when I have to. I prefer to do my shooting of animals with a camera, but sometimes other methods are called for. I like that government plan up to a point. It is very good. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Rett

Yes, I agree, culling is sometimes necessary. Even so I tend to side with the wolves on this issue. Perhaps we should try controlling human activities instead, to bring ecosystems back into balance? Yes, we have problems with feral dogs here too, killing pets and threatening people. I fought off a feral dog with my garden fork last summer when it attacked me and my lab/shepherd mix while I was gardening. The cops shot it after they were called in by animal control. It was a real mess, I can tell you. Coyotes are common here as well - we have a good population of them here in Indiana, where they repopulated from the west about 20 years ago. I like having them around too. Just keep your cats and small dogs close. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Wolf or not wolf?

You want to hear the wolves! I remember when i was 7 yrs. I heard a fox outside my room in the lane, it curdled my blood, as they say, and I ran terrified in to my parents bed, my father going to mine. I always put my sheets over my ear at night, because of that scare! On the other hand if I knew that it was a fox, or a wolf, that might have been different. What was that film about the 'man that ran with the deer' or caribou, I don't remember except that he lived in the wilds of the north and studied the animals, each evening he saw a she-wolf come to the edge of his area,which he had pee'd on to mark his territory, she sat on the hill opposite him and just looked. Then they became friends. He ate mice-anything the wolves did, and on being visited by an old native American, he was asked what he did, the son of the old man translated the fact that he ate mice, and the Indian's answer was "very good idea". This has become a standing joke when something absurd is done we say "very good idea"!! It sounds a good idea, and I think there is something like that in Norway, but I am not a specialist on the material about the subject. I do think we could let the wolves have some of the lambs nut how to stop them just killing a number and leaving them there? The gaupe, or lynx does the same thing, there are the bears too. This world is not made for other than we humans now, sadly all else takes second place and is pushed to tis limits of both space and endurance. I was going home to my haunted, rented house in 80's when they said there were a lot of gauper in the area, so with a stick I went up to the isolated house in the snow-darkness, not sure what I would have done with the stick, perhaps put it in the mouth of the lynx, I heard muffled noises and when I reached a snow bank close to them I peeped over and there were a whole herd of roe deer, I froze and watched them for a while, beautiful. Must go for now yours Ann of Norway
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 3 months ago

Ann

The film was "Never Cry Wolf", released in 1983. It was adapted from a book of the same title by the Canadian amateur ecologist Farley McGill Mowat, who spent a couple of years living with wolves in the Canadian north in the early 1960s to determine why their numbers were dwindling. He came the the conclusion that we humans were the cause. His informal research was instrumental in changing the way people see wolves, and also had a positive effect on wolf protection. He ate mice because he allegedly discovered that in the Canadian north wolves that do not follow the caribou herds feed almost exclusively on mice when the caribou aren't around. This has been disputed by many scientists, however. He claimed that he wanted to determine how nutritious the mice were, and yes, he really did eat them whole, YUK! The book is very good, very funny in some places - marking boundaries, for example - however there are some serious reservations about how much of it was fact and how much fiction, but its a good read all the same. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Tusen takk

Thousand thanks Jim for telling me the name of the film, it was a while ago, I loved it. Yes it maybe was a little of a yarn in places, but it had such sympathy with the wild life and a wonderful scene, in the film, of him running naked with the caribou, how did they get that? It appeals to the wild nature in us all. Like William Long and another book I enjoyed called "Scool of the Woods" can't remember if that was the same author. This makes me want to go out and run in the woods too, aoooooooooh! Takk again from Ann of Norway
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Howling, roses & wolfery ... great write Rett as always

Wow Rett, you great creature you... You really stir things up & generate great discussions... I loved this work a lot & I loved the discussions I got to read, though am running out of time so will have to return to read the latter ones they look fascinating to me. I make my girls (I facitlitate a community women's choir among other things) howl on occassion as part of our warm up... you should try it... I always advocate a good wolf howl in the bath as emotional release, it is incredibly liberating & empowering... truly! Did you really see a wolf with a rose or is it just poetic lisence? How amazing if you did. Years ago I owned a dingo (probably the Australian equivalent of a wolf?). She was an extraordinary creature, exceptionally loyal & loving to me & so unlike a dog in her being... intelligence way beyond any dog I have known & sensitivity & consideration so subtle & so endearing. But here there is fear also, it's the places where human's intrude on nature & then wonder why it bites back that we struggle with. Anyway, great writing as always. & by the way, I love the generosity you have towards your peers here, it is really quite remarkable, you are a true diplomat... just thought I'd put that in here. I have no doubt it makes a big difference in people's lives. It's a good thing. Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Anni, Thank you

Actually, the poem was inspired by a picture I found on the web, that I have posted today. It was intriguing and the poem was inspired by it. Speaking of howling, I howl or sing in the bathroom a lot. My wife calls it howling, I call it singing and the only place I can do it without everyone yelping and running for cover. Seems I love music, but can't carry a tune in a paper sack, unless you call Z flat a tune! Coyotes and wolves both hold great symbolism in Native American culture with wolves being wise and great warriors and the coyote being a bit of a trickster. As for being a diplomat, I wouldn't exactly call it that. I try to treat people as I want to be treated and give respect. In return I expect to get respect. I can and have been a real whirling son of a bitch when I think myself or someone else has been treated wrongly or badly. I have one hell of a temper wen riled and I am an opinionated old cuss, but I try to keep it under control. *LOL* I am very glad you find my writing entertaining and I truly do appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Tassie Devils, whirls of fury & shower howling

Hah, you make me laugh... yeah we need an easy access to pictures being inserted into our comments here... I am chuckling because the description of you on a "bad" day is so reminiscent of another native animal we have here, The Tasmanian devil (poor things are endangered now, there is a terrible disease spreading among them, we already lost an amazing unique creature in Tassie, the Tas. Tiger... crazy buggers hunted them out, think the last died in captivity in the 20's or 30's), they are wild & unruly & terrible tempered, snarly bitey things... Have a feeling there was a cartoon about one years back when I was young "Bugs Bunny" ilk (maybe he was called TAZ?), where the thing would spin in a frenzied rush of fury & flap. But I'd like to see that picture, where did you post it?... & don't you love that a picture can set off such a great write. As for your howling - I teach singing & could sort you soon enough, but I'm such an advocate that everyone should have access to singing that I say yay showers, if that's the place then go for it... usually good acoustics in the bathroom anyway. Enjoy Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
Rett

Rett

17 years 3 months ago

Yep, the Tasmanian Devil was a character

on Bugs Bunny cartoons, plus had his own cartoon and is still popular. They called him Taz. We can get all kinds of Taz stuff over here. As for the pic, it should be showing on your browser, but if not here is the link. http://s123.photobucket.com/albums/o284/mistytigergirl/Animals/?action=view&current=WolfRose.jpg Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

One more little story Rett

Roughly translated from Norwegian, but about an American fox (sorry not a wolf), I think:- A hunter I know used a whole day, one Autumn, to fix up a horrid trap to catch a fox he had seen in the area. He washed the trap thoroughly to take away any trace of his own odours, and then covered it over with leaves. Very satisfied with the job he had done he turned to go home, when he spied, not more than a few metres from him sat the fox who had followed carefully every detail of the elaborate procedure! I liked this, serve him right for using those horrid things. Your Ann
Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

I say good for the Fox

I hate those kind of traps. Trap them humanely or kill them outright, but those cruel jaw traps are blasphemy. Horrid things! Respectfully, Rett: "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905

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