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Feb 20, 2009
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The Wolf and the Rose
The Wolf and the Rose
See the wolf with the rose
Trotting 'cross the field
Wonder what that wise one knows
And what his thoughts may yield
What prompted him to brave the thorn
The stem held gingerly
The cruel punctures he has borne
To carry such so tenderly
Nature sometimes plays us strange
With its twists and turns
That forest wolf on yonder plain -
And where his thoughts may yearn
Are they just of food and fun
Or is there something more?
Breaking from that trot to run
Let's see what is in store
Across the grasses em'rald green
Beyond an old deer's bones
He traipses through an icy stream
And over cold hard stones
To gently lay the petals red
Beside his mate within
Sitting back he cocks his head
To sing to moon and wind
Perhaps we are quite the same
The beasts called wolf and man
For it's love no matter their name
That both may understand
I have to give credit to my co-writer here. C. Thorne was one of the very first people I met on the internet back in the dark ages before internet exploiter came out and surfing was ruled by Navigator. We lose touch once in a while, but always manage to find each other again.
See the wolf with the rose
Trotting 'cross the field
Wonder what that wise one knows
And what his thoughts may yield
What prompted him to brave the thorn
The stem held gingerly
The cruel punctures he has borne
To carry such so tenderly
Nature sometimes plays us strange
With its twists and turns
That forest wolf on yonder plain -
And where his thoughts may yearn
Are they just of food and fun
Or is there something more?
Breaking from that trot to run
Let's see what is in store
Across the grasses em'rald green
Beyond an old deer's bones
He traipses through an icy stream
And over cold hard stones
To gently lay the petals red
Beside his mate within
Sitting back he cocks his head
To sing to moon and wind
Perhaps we are quite the same
The beasts called wolf and man
For it's love no matter their name
That both may understand
I have to give credit to my co-writer here. C. Thorne was one of the very first people I met on the internet back in the dark ages before internet exploiter came out and surfing was ruled by Navigator. We lose touch once in a while, but always manage to find each other again.
— Rett, Feb 20, 2009
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Jacqueline Johnson
17 years 3 months ago
Trotting
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Jaqueline
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Janice
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Wolves trot and what a trot this is
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Ann
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks a lot Double D
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
Brilliant response DD & I totally agree
JWwildcat2012
17 years 3 months ago
Good subject to pick,Rett
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Muchas Gracias Scott
Linda Moses
17 years 3 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
I appreciate it Linda
press
17 years 3 months ago
The Wolf and the Rose the tile was so deep
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Press
press
17 years 3 months ago
This is the beginning it is
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Absolutely right
Tink
17 years 3 months ago
Beautiful Write!
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
You are right Tink
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Rett...
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
*ROFLMAO* Now THAT would make
orgami
17 years 3 months ago
I liked the singing part
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Absolutely Orgami
nokros
17 years 3 months ago
The Wolf and the Rose
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
*LOL* Thanks Nokros
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Love this one
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Jim
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Loping with a line through the o is
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 3 months ago
Astounding poem Rett. Heard
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Katie
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Ann
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Jim
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Rett
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Wolf or not wolf?
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Ann
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Tusen takk
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
Howling, roses & wolfery ... great write Rett as always
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Anni, Thank you
Cloudthings
17 years 3 months ago
Tassie Devils, whirls of fury & shower howling
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Yep, the Tasmanian Devil was a character
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
One more little story Rett
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
I say good for the Fox
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