Midnight

"In the steel blue light" as your title. I know, it's a lazy cop out on my part, since it's the first line, but I think it works really well, especially to set the mood of the poem. Love the sensuality here, "being in some else's acid trip," did you mean "someone else's?" I really love that line, didn't even notice the perceived typo until just now." Also should "Its" be "It's?" Really like the sound repetition in "Lightly" and "slightly," that works really well and adds to the atmosphere you've got going here. Mark W. "our hope is in the living God, who is the Savior of all people and particularly of all believers." 1 Timothy 4:10

The kisses that seem to last forever and make your foot raise just a little, you curl your toes in anticipation of the next touch. Loved it Emarie 5/5 Lissa I hold it true, whatever befall; I feel it, when I sorrow most; 'Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all.