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Feb 26, 2009
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Feather
Detached from a shared consciousness,
Parted from a dove’s tail,
Giving up an aimed flight,
Drifting slowly... slowly...
Memories of shared conscience.
Now only uncertainties of abyss.
Air that carries me,
Whispers to me ageless stories.
Drifting downward, catching
Wind with my body.
Blown to halt with a sigh,
I rest on a windowsill;
Before I fly.
— Pragyan, Feb 26, 2009
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faerybeki
17 years 3 months ago
Interesting theme, to
Pragyan
17 years 3 months ago
Hi...
MeanderS
17 years 1 month ago
paper-boat
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