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Mar 08, 2009
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like rain
i hold out my hand
it is raining
my anguished heart,
You
are a returning thought
on Hummingbird wings,
carressing me,
drenching me
with golden light,
i feel Your presence, My Love,
we touch like rain on skin.
it is raining
my anguished heart,
You
are a returning thought
on Hummingbird wings,
carressing me,
drenching me
with golden light,
i feel Your presence, My Love,
we touch like rain on skin.
— Kailashana, Mar 08, 2009
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themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Anna...
Kailashana
17 years 3 months ago
((((((((Moonman))))))))Whethe
zarul
17 years 3 months ago
hi
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