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Nameless

 
a soul, untrammelled
by demonic forces has
the vastness of space  
— leonard daranjo, Mar 11, 2009

Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Leonard...

you are the King of short-full poetry... untrammelled... a great word, I of course had to look it up and according to webster's, it only had one "l" untrammeled. love the thought within this! Richard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Nameless

Sorry to have missed this Leonard! Very busy at work. I too enjoyed this one~ Your poetry is in-depth and always very meaningful to me~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

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