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Retribution, Your Minds Electrocution. (Original Poem)
On this bitter day,
I finally have something to say.
No more restraints on my emotions
My anger’s deeper then any ocean.
Everyone labeled me a fool
Made themselves out to be cool.
By casting me off as clown
Why? Because i like to make people smile?
Now you’ve seen my frown.
And the tides of turned and your laughter
Has quieted down.
Cuz today’s the day that I’ve snapped
Fuck u!!!! And my feelings of being trapped.
It’s finally time i unleash the rage
All this time its been in a cage
Compressed and begging to be set free
this is what happens when u mess with me.
The years have passed
You i have now surpassed,
physically, and most importantly
MENTALLY.
You’ve pushed me to Hell’s edge and back
Now Im setting off my attack
My eternal retribution
Ur minds electrocution
I won’t lay a finger on filth such a thee
With my words i’ll cripple you as you have me.
So that you can despise your very existence
My anger’s cage has been blown to bits,
Just like your neighbors flimsy fence.
I won’t stop till your kneeling,
Begging and pleading,
At my feet begging me to stop.
Why should I? All these years
With your fists you’ve made me drop
To the same position
Now enjoy being put into submission
And LISTEN.
While i make you want to slit your skin
To relieve the mental anguish your in.
Like i told you as a kid,
“Someday I’ll treat you even worse then u did!”
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Now you’re crying out for your mama.
And I’m enjoying every second
Just with words I’ve got u to cower
Taller, smarter and stronger then you, now I TOWER.
And to top it all off BULLY, I have you to thank for this
Because your torture over the years
Has made my mind, stronger then your Fist!
Now with mud on your face,
Get the FUCK out of here
Cuz like queen’s song, Bully
You’re a big disgrace.
They say payback is a dish best served cold,
This mental scar, you’ll carry till your old.
Hahaha bully, You’ve just been TOLD!@@@!
-Sophocles 2/28/09
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