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Mar 15, 2009
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Easier Said Than Done
I tore my hair
I cried out
I've lost my reason
There is no doubt
I can't take it
I can't cope
Life's not worth it
I have no hope
On second thought
We all have problems
We all have pain
My life's no different
We're all the same
No more songs of sadness
No more poems of hate
I must pull myself up
Before it's too late
All this moaning
Which I abhor
I've said enough
I'll say no more
No more whining
About the past
This poem of self pity
Will be my last
On second thought
I've changed my mind
There's no way your problem
Could be worse than mine!
— Michael Landau, Mar 15, 2009
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Critiques
IRENE
17 years 2 months ago
easier said than done
Michael Landau
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Irene!
Nilmini
17 years 2 months ago
Bravo My Friend
Michael Landau
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Nilmini!
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Michael, outstanding
Michael Landau
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Rett!
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
BTW, I noticed the downvoter hit yours also
Michael Landau
17 years 2 months ago
I can't wait for the rating system to be changed!
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