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Mar 16, 2009
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Twice
Street was empty
dark and cold
I stopped by to return an unread book
and there I met him again
walking towards his car
he poured me some smiles
in a glance of his cup
and took off.....
how can you meet a stranger twice
in a same day
at two different places?
In the morning
I was not listening when he said hi
I was too busy with your thoughts
that I forget to even look his way.....
but tonight
I was so heartbroken
so fed up with you
that I gladly took the cup and drank it too
Oh how I wish I could take your chains from my mind
How I wish I could unlock my heart
How I wish I could give it all to the one
who would never let me feel so alone at nights......
aka Darya
— Darya, Mar 16, 2009
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Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
(((((((((((Hedi))))))))))You
Darya
17 years 2 months ago
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