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D

Twice

Street was empty

dark and cold

I stopped by to return an unread book

and there I met him again

walking towards his car 

he poured me some smiles

in a glance of his cup

and took off.....

how can you meet a stranger twice

in a same day

at two different places?

 

In the morning

I was not listening when he said hi

I was too busy with your thoughts

that I forget to even look his way.....

 

but tonight

I was so heartbroken

so fed up with you

that I gladly took the cup and drank it too

 

Oh how I wish I could take your chains from my mind

How I wish I could unlock my heart

How I wish I could give it all to the one

who would never let me feel so alone at nights......




aka Darya

— Darya, Mar 16, 2009

Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

(((((((((((Hedi))))))))))You

(((((((((((Hedi)))))))))) You & me both! What a poem! Wish I would have thought of it. (Actually I always wonder is that you, my Love?) Hmm that sounds like the beginning of a poem... ;-) Thank you for the inspiration. My love. ~A "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho

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