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Mar 17, 2009
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I See
I see
Fields of Light
Swirling atomic
Splendor
And
I
One tiny
Point
Of energy
Can perceive
This is
The projection
Of Thee
Thou
Who creates
Beyond
Time
And
Space
Directing
In infinite
Grace
And
I
Am part
Of
Infinity
My only
Hold
Is
Consciousness
That
I can
Manifest
But in
My longing
To be free
I question
What
Thou
Requests of
Me
— Aureo, Mar 17, 2009
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Ink Dragon
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