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loved
loved
Sep 19, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I shall not be gone for long

I shall not be gone for long
but where I now belong
is far, far forlorn
sooner than later
I may be gone

But

hope to return
with Love to all
from Loved Anon...

I now reside
In a different world
they call paradice,
not paradise
but
where their is no ice,
only infested by mice.

None-the-less
life here is also very nice.

I miss you all too.
With love to all
who still loved Loved...

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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M

magics02

13 years 10 months ago

Loved

We might leave for a while
but we all come back
to share a smile..

Mona

loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

thanx magic

Lost memory

Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.

They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?

loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

Shall

But from the darkened wilderness of time
i shall have to wait
albeit
yet return i shall though may be late
but I shall continue to hope
my friends will wait.
loved

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Dear Loved,

Are you still having trouble getting back on? If so, I suggest you write to Hooded Stranger, or Andrew for help. Miss you!

always, Cat

loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

thanks

was slighly indisposed and busy in meditation
shall revert asap
regards all well wishers