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loved
loved
Sep 19, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I shall not be gone for long

I shall not be gone for long
but where I now belong
is far, far forlorn
sooner than later
I may be gone

But

hope to return
with Love to all
from Loved Anon...

I now reside
In a different world
they call paradice,
not paradise
but
where their is no ice,
only infested by mice.

None-the-less
life here is also very nice.

I miss you all too.
With love to all
who still loved Loved...

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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M

magics02

14 years 1 month ago

Loved

We might leave for a while
but we all come back
to share a smile..

Mona

loved

loved

14 years ago

thanx magic

Lost memory

Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.

They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?

loved

loved

14 years 1 month ago

Shall

But from the darkened wilderness of time
i shall have to wait
albeit
yet return i shall though may be late
but I shall continue to hope
my friends will wait.
loved

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

14 years ago

Dear Loved,

Are you still having trouble getting back on? If so, I suggest you write to Hooded Stranger, or Andrew for help. Miss you!

always, Cat

loved

loved

14 years ago

thanks

was slighly indisposed and busy in meditation
shall revert asap
regards all well wishers